Wellz,
It was a nice effore and the storyline was there...But, it just didn't flow. I can say, I applaud you for using a little Swift3D 2.0. And I emplore you to use it more. It's not that hard to figure out and the files are really smaller than you would think. Also, If you want to go with bigger and better files in Flash or Swift, you should look into a progream called Optimaze. It's made my the makers of Swift3D i.e. Electric Rain.
Good Luck!
=)